A Different Kind Of Story

I know all of my posts are about the craziness of my kids.  They are stories that are true blue daily occurrences.   I really love writing these stories but I also love to write other kinds of stories.  I have written a few short children's books.  No one has ever read them but I would like a little feedback.  I think.  I'm a little nervous but I'll start with my shortest.  Its a very short, young children's book.  With a deep breath here it goes....eeek!  Be gentle with the well welcomed feedback. 


MAGIC KISSES

My Daddy has magic kisses you see,
I know because one day I fell and scraped my knee.
He picked me up and held me tight
Then kissed my scrape with all his might.
With a smile he said "Is it okay?"
And just like that the pain went away.

Another day I bumped my head.
A big kiss, a hug and a book we read.
Suddenly I didn't feel sad,
In fact my head didn't even feel bad.

I seem to get hurt a lot,
When putting on my shoes, I ran but forgot.
Tripping over my laces that were untied.
Big tears came that I just couldn't hide.
Daddy came running and wrapped me in his arms.
At the touch of his kiss I knew there was no harm.

So you see no matter what bruises or bumps come my way
Daddy's magic kisses blow them away.


~A.Meydam